Friday, October 31, 2014

The Ventriloquist Script - Joined Together

Written in about 5 hours. It changed a bit as I wrote. 
Marty will appreciate that I've reintroduced Uncle Goggle.
It's rough, but it will do. It has the shots broken down. 
May add one or two. 
It will be storyboard style- all the same size frame.



  I'll publish it to this site when I've done the art.
Please. Give notes. I'll probably use them.

6 comments:

Davis Chino said...

I almost DVR'ed "Devil Doll" when it played a few days ago on TCM--dang!

Love the song by X.

Elz, this sounds great--I'll give it a read and post notes ASAP!

MrGoodson2 said...

Thanks Marty. Uncle Goggle's patter could be snappier.

Davis Chino said...

Elz! I LOVE the story! It's so good for you. Perfect sort of vehicle for yr brand of Goodsonian gothic comedy.

Rather than clog our comment section, I've sent my notes on the script to you via email. It's a pain to get that sort of thing into a comments section. Hope you find something useful in 'em.

MrGoodson2 said...

Marty- great notes. I sent you a reply via email telling you how great they were.
I have a goal of Wednesday through Saturday of completely thumbnailing the story.

As I move to a finish I'm going to try and think like Tom Moon and do some drawings I composite into shots.

Davis Chino said...

Elz, don't rush yrself--just enjoy the process! No need to crank this strip out on any per-conceived, hyper-compressed schedule. The speed comes with repetition...at least, that's what I'm learning!

MrGoodson2 said...

Don't worry about me moving slow. I always move slow.