It came out looking like a bad attempt at faux good girl art. So weird...maybe it's just the blue pencil affecting my judgment, but to me the rendering has that contemporary comics style I've never wanted to emulate--and yet, apparently it's how I sketch now!
I'm tempted to take my usual PhoSho pass at correcting all the little things that bug me, and compare THAT one as well...but mainly I just wanted to share this to show the (amusing) differences between what I thought I was drawing and the real thing. Always instructive to see
the things you miss, and the things you change without noticing....
Hey, I was really trying to be accurate!