Right ... here I am redesigning the strip (again??). I would think it more effective if the 3nd to last panel was broken in two. That way it might be possible to do a reveal on the answer, as in: Top Panel: Two ... Bottom Panel ... tentacles ...Just a minor case of redesign-itis on my part. Joke works fine as is. ;-)
Hmm, not bad Tom. I like it, although I don't have much room left for another shot. It might take some pain in the ass photoshopping...... actually I just looked at it again and I could keep everything the same, just put Sam's 'how many fingers' question in panel two and start Cork's 'Two...' in the next panel. Hmmm, I think that'll work better. Good work ol' what's your name.
heh heh ... two minds with but a single thought ... $UCCE$$!!
Nice suggestion Tom. It does work better. Great job Scott. Not everyone is willing to take that extra bit of time and trouble to re-do something just to make it a little better.
Scott is a rare find indeed ... And Cork, too!!
Nice catch Tom!! It is better now. Timing! Yes!! Last panel might be a little busy around her head. Or not.
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