Worthwhile experiment. I'm re-energized

Also took Marty's advice and gave one guy a pith helmet. That makes it hanky-head-, ball cap, and pith helmet.

Second page shows how the silhouette gets less readable. Gives me ideas about edits I might make

The ending, giant tentacle comes out of the hole and sweeps the rest of the party into the hole. My version Of Uncle Creepy wraps up the story. What you saw and what it meant. I wish he'd tell me right now. Otherwise I have to make it up.

Stabbed down a little tighter. I'll try and finish the whole thing, balloons, tone and all by tomorrow.