tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post3120728338043163116..comments2023-10-26T05:21:31.542-07:00Comments on TuesdayArtGroup: Up to Panel 37 in Thumbnails. About 60 to goJeffhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07985132183438922332noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-41617601185963405702015-11-12T20:35:41.149-08:002015-11-12T20:35:41.149-08:00That teaching is time consuming. I bet you dig it....That teaching is time consuming. I bet you dig it.MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-39249088953167981792015-11-12T20:34:49.178-08:002015-11-12T20:34:49.178-08:00Thanks for all the notes and praise. I think it wi...Thanks for all the notes and praise. I think it will play as a good champagne bottle smash on the hull of the Uncle Goggle Pitiless Eyes web comic.MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-75047450685896231332015-11-12T20:32:50.286-08:002015-11-12T20:32:50.286-08:00I like that flip on "My hand. " "Da...I like that flip on "My hand. " "Damn You." Good idea. That's funny that you couldn't watch Dead of Night. It's probably the best of the evil ventriloquist dummy stories. It is creepy. I have to look it up. I think it was Amicus. MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-24451301413793545352015-11-12T20:19:06.539-08:002015-11-12T20:19:06.539-08:00ELLIZ!
I'm loving it!
Sorry--all the myriad ...ELLIZ!<br /><br />I'm loving it!<br /><br />Sorry--all the myriad outlets for communication have my head spinning--I've got four different web interfaces for my school stuff and keeping up with that is seriously disorienting me, and--most unforgivably--taking me away from doings here on the classic TAG Blog.<br /><br />This is looking so good. I love the evil Howdy-Doody-ness of yr dummy. The Hestonian "Damn you to hell!!" The dummy showing up when you think he's escaped with the off-screen voice--all super great story-telling!<br /><br />When I first read thru, I was confused on frame one that he was saying "I'm sorry" to the dummy, not the dead girl...on panel 2 of page 2 "Damn you! My Hand!" wonder if "My hand!" is unnecessary...? If not, maybe he'd say them in inverted order "My hand(surprise) Damn you (anger directed at source)"? <br /><br />That is really the quibbliest of quibbles, so forgive me for even mentioning it.<br /><br />And page 3 is such a dramatic event--the break up--that first fram is so goo--I wonder if the second frame could linger on the scene a little more...? Maybe a dramatic down shot from a wide over-the-shoulder position--show us the man as he looks down into the trashbin--just his (silhouetted?) figure looming over the "scene of the crime"--we don't even need to see the dummy. Panel 3 with it's dramatic closeup as you have it is great--maybe you could really push it and go in even tighter?? Show his desperation/relief/pain?? Love the long shot to finish the passage off. So classic!!<br /><br />Love that you're doing it as a web comic. Super cool!<br /><br />In the run up to Halloween, we caught a few minutes of the strange Michael Redgrave film where he is dominated by his malevolent, possibly independent dummy. It was too creepy and we had to change the channel!<br /><br /> <br /><br />Davis Chinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168954208679712542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-57641589742637931912015-11-10T09:17:38.413-08:002015-11-10T09:17:38.413-08:00The script weighs in at 93 frames. Maybe 94. Appro...The script weighs in at 93 frames. Maybe 94. Approximately. It would be about 12 pages going 8 frames to a page. Just right. Maybe have extra column space to direct people to the web comic experience.MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-10259998894667207972015-11-09T21:05:13.039-08:002015-11-09T21:05:13.039-08:00Okay then. Is the number of pages up to you?Okay then. Is the number of pages up to you?BDMontaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10668132947298479801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-53963325604845468672015-11-09T20:09:43.089-08:002015-11-09T20:09:43.089-08:00Ben. Not the way I'll do it. I'll be build...Ben. Not the way I'll do it. I'll be building the thing where one panel is viewed at a time. And you button advance through the story. Like a slide show.<br /><br />What is good about this thumbnail process. I 've discovered I can live with 8 equal frames for a single page of comics. That will be how I do the Gorgon contribution. Might seem small but the finished art is going to be all about easy to read.MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-41223100181338000502015-11-09T19:33:09.143-08:002015-11-09T19:33:09.143-08:00For a web production, is there a set panel/page co...For a web production, is there a set panel/page count?<br />BDMontaghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10668132947298479801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-9343745541341328452015-11-09T10:46:04.227-08:002015-11-09T10:46:04.227-08:00Dreamweaver. The HTML web edit program.
Dreamweaver. The HTML web edit program.<br />MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-11113741389170019982015-11-09T10:42:27.694-08:002015-11-09T10:42:27.694-08:00Once I get the thumbnails all done I move to the f...Once I get the thumbnails all done I move to the formatting into photoshop stage. I also want to get the Dreamworks stage dabbled into place. Where the hyperlink- panel advancing part of the web comic will occur. I should probably do that with placeholder art so that it is all ready for the art.<br /><br />I want there to be a couple of spots for ads. Not so much for the revenue but for the motivation to come up with new content. I have some sort of block about working for free. Just making a pittance of money makes it 'real' for me.MrGoodson2https://www.blogger.com/profile/02329640961760572269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19949517.post-49323324464398016692015-11-09T09:25:13.212-08:002015-11-09T09:25:13.212-08:00Makes me eager to find out what the plot is. He go...Makes me eager to find out what the plot is. He goes from smashing his dummy to a hayride... intriguing. What can it mean?Tom Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11624247648988106639noreply@blogger.com